3,320.75 Miles

[Malu]

I am on my weekly rounds of visiting the forgotten poem. This one takes the cake at over 2,100 views and zero reponses. You would think that one out of over 2,000 could have said something. I hope you were not shooting for 3,320.75 views without comment. It is a nice tribute to Hawaii (? I assume). There is no place like home, is there?

I know the reason....ppl don't respond to long poems. Its sad, but true.

I really loved the imagery, and really felt your longing. Good job here.

bena.

Thanks bena

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I am on my weekly rounds of visiting the forgotten poem. This one takes the cake at over 2,100 views and zero reponses. You would think that one out of over 2,000 could have said something. I hope you were not shooting for 3,320.75 views without comment. It is a nice tribute to Hawaii (? I assume). There is no place like home, is there?

You know what happens when you assume right? hahaha so no, your assumption about this poem being about Hawaii is incorrect. Thanks for commenting