Brunch (For fun)

Brunch (For fun)

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#27

09-30-2013, 06:35 AM

I scan it differently, milo -- that's the trouble with scansion I suppose, it's not an exact science.

I COULD becomes a spondee for me. (That's two equally stressed syllables, Jen)

I COULD deVOUR your CINnamon SKIN -- tiny difference -- but my alternative is to demote "could", the stress is always on the "I" for me.

It could be worse

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Brunch (For fun) - by tigrflye - 09-29-2013, 05:09 AM

RE: Brunch (For fun) - by billy - 09-29-2013, 09:11 AM

RE: Brunch (For fun) - by tigrflye - 09-29-2013, 09:24 AM

RE: Brunch (For fun) - by billy - 09-29-2013, 10:49 AM

RE: Brunch (For fun) - by Versify - 09-29-2013, 11:12 AM

RE: Brunch (For fun) - by tigrflye - 09-29-2013, 12:13 PM

RE: Brunch (For fun) - by billy - 09-29-2013, 03:33 PM

RE: Brunch (For fun) - by tigrflye - 09-29-2013, 03:53 PM

RE: Brunch (For fun) - by Todd - 09-29-2013, 07:44 PM

RE: Brunch (For fun) - by tectak - 09-30-2013, 01:45 AM

RE: Brunch (For fun) - by tigrflye - 09-30-2013, 02:05 AM

RE: Brunch (For fun) - by milo - 09-30-2013, 02:43 AM

RE: Brunch (For fun) - by tigrflye - 09-30-2013, 03:29 AM

RE: Brunch (For fun) - by milo - 09-30-2013, 03:51 AM

RE: Brunch (For fun) - by Leanne - 09-30-2013, 04:46 AM

RE: Brunch (For fun) - by tigrflye - 09-30-2013, 05:18 AM

RE: Brunch (For fun) - by Todd - 09-30-2013, 05:20 AM

RE: Brunch (For fun) - by tigrflye - 09-30-2013, 05:46 AM

RE: Brunch (For fun) - by Todd - 09-30-2013, 05:50 AM

RE: Brunch (For fun) - by Leanne - 09-30-2013, 05:54 AM

RE: Brunch (For fun) - by milo - 09-30-2013, 05:56 AM

RE: Brunch (For fun) - by Todd - 09-30-2013, 05:56 AM

RE: Brunch (For fun) - by Todd - 09-30-2013, 05:58 AM

RE: Brunch (For fun) - by tigrflye - 09-30-2013, 06:22 AM

RE: Brunch (For fun) - by milo - 09-30-2013, 06:29 AM

RE: Brunch (For fun) - by Leanne - 09-30-2013, 06:27 AM

RE: Brunch (For fun) - by Leanne - 09-30-2013, 06:35 AM

RE: Brunch (For fun) - by milo - 09-30-2013, 06:48 AM

RE: Brunch (For fun) - by Todd - 09-30-2013, 06:36 AM

RE: Brunch (For fun) - by tigrflye - 09-30-2013, 06:39 AM

RE: Brunch (For fun) - by Leanne - 09-30-2013, 06:42 AM

RE: Brunch (For fun) - by Leanne - 09-30-2013, 06:50 AM

RE: Brunch (For fun) - by tigrflye - 09-30-2013, 06:56 AM

RE: Brunch (For fun) - by Leanne - 09-30-2013, 06:58 AM

RE: Brunch (For fun) - by billy - 09-30-2013, 09:31 AM

RE: Brunch (For fun) - by tigrflye - 09-30-2013, 09:33 AM

RE: Brunch (For fun) - by tectak - 09-30-2013, 06:59 PM

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