Sadness
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The first three lines are my favorite. I feel securely placed in the moonlight, sitting by the window.. waiting.. and then it trails off a little for me. I do still like the poem, but I feel it started stronger than it finished.
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Sadness - by mortal - 09-24-2013, 07:14 AM
RE: Sadness - by makeshift - 09-24-2013, 01:27 PM
RE: Sadness - by mortal - 09-24-2013, 09:55 PM
RE: Sadness - by OliverPorano - 09-25-2013, 07:49 AM
RE: Sadness - by tigrflye - 09-28-2013, 02:50 PM
RE: Sadness - by tectak - 09-30-2013, 07:21 PM



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