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09-25-2013, 11:12 AM
this didn't do much for me. i wanted to have some idea of what you were talking about but the poem was too short for me to get any idea. poems this short should have something tangible in it to create a solid image in the reader's mind in my opinion. maybe read some classic chinese haikus for some inspiration. those type of poems often create a very solid image with few words.
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Unititled - by OliverPorano - 09-22-2013, 01:26 AM
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RE: Unititled - by OliverPorano - 09-25-2013, 08:08 AM
RE: Unititled - by mortal - 09-25-2013, 05:08 AM
RE: Unititled - by leftover sushi - 09-25-2013, 11:12 AM
RE: Unititled - by Malu - 10-07-2013, 01:59 PM
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