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[OliverPorano]

helplessness is blind
the symphony of consciousness
stops in the air
with the mad chatter
of unseen audiences

This is either brilliant or confusing...I'm not sure which
I get that helpless people are blind to their needs and that someone hears voices in their head? I think it's either too big for my little brain, or it's too personal for me to understand since I can't read your mind; or I'm just stupid right now...

It's supposed to describe the rising moment of panic whenever you realized that you forgot something and that you are absolutely helpless to do anything that would help the situation.

helplessness is blind
the symphony of consciousness
stops in the air
with the mad chatter
of unseen audiences

Hi, Oliver. I'm curious about why you used blind instead of deaf when the rest of the poem uses audio references. If you meant to make me stop to figure it out you succeeded. I enjoyed "the mad chatter
of unseen audiences"

Thanks for the read.

I was thinking along the lines that panic blinded you to the outside world and how the unconscious surfaced in these moments.