09-25-2013, 07:49 AM
Like makeshift said, the whole thing is kind of cliche. What's also bugging me is that there are commas after every line, even in the middle of sentences where they shouldn't be.
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RE: Sadness - by OliverPorano - 09-25-2013, 07:49 AM
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