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Inspired by Malu

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Are you alluding to me?

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09-23-2013, 12:43 PM

(09-22-2013, 01:08 AM)Erthona Wrote: A snake in the hand,
a cock in the frigid bush,
sucking life away.

Dale

like it,

merely because it's succinct already i'd suggest losing the two A's

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Inspired by Malu - by Erthona - 09-22-2013, 01:08 AM

RE: Inspired by Malu - by Malu - 09-22-2013, 03:43 AM

RE: Inspired by Malu - by Erthona - 09-23-2013, 12:34 PM

RE: Inspired by Malu - by Malu - 09-24-2013, 01:32 AM

RE: Inspired by Malu - by billy - 09-23-2013, 12:43 PM

RE: Inspired by Malu - by Erthona - 09-23-2013, 01:00 PM

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