09-23-2013, 03:45 AM
I like the tone of this one, and how the short lines drive home that the Captain is a man of simplicity, straight-to-the-point. I have one question, though this is more due to my own ignorance than any fault on your part, but what is meant by the falling screens? Could it be fog clearing, or somebody removing their "mask", or is it a more literal screen that's going over my head?