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Is a cacophony
Of smells.
Staggering perfumes!
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the insight in the one is immense.
nicely done.
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(02-03-2011, 05:34 PM)Ris Yerg Wrote: Is a cacophony
Of smells.
Staggering perfumes!
Interesting choice of words considering cacophony deals with sounds rather than smells, but then again, poetry can put together several styles and still be great. Good job, thanks for the read
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I love these snappy, vivid poems (same reason I love haikus). To be able to convey so much in so few words is talent.