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Lincoln's Birthday (Revision 4)

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09-22-2013, 01:56 PM

I've added more metrical variation (within IP compliance) and made some metrical corrections, changed some awkward and regional words, and compressed it a bit more by combining a few lines.

I do feel a little bad for revising it after milo's wonderful reading, but there were parts I had to fix.

Scott

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Lincoln's Birthday (Revision 4) - by svanhoeven - 06-13-2013, 01:09 AM

RE: Lincoln's Birthday, February 13, 2006 - by svanhoeven - 06-14-2013, 05:14 AM

RE: Lincoln’s Birthday, February 13, 2006 - by billy - 06-14-2013, 04:11 PM

RE: Lincoln’s Birthday, February 13, 2006 - by tectak - 06-14-2013, 06:01 PM

RE: Lincoln’s Birthday, February 13, 2006 - by svanhoeven - 06-14-2013, 09:53 PM

RE: Lincoln’s Birthday, February 13, 2006 - by wystan1000 - 06-18-2013, 12:56 AM

RE: Lincoln’s Birthday, February 13, 2006 - by svanhoeven - 06-18-2013, 01:21 AM

RE: Lincoln’s Birthday, February 13, 2006 - by wystan1000 - 06-18-2013, 01:23 AM

RE: Lincoln's Birthday (Revision 1, blank verse) - by svanhoeven - 06-18-2013, 03:32 AM

RE: Lincoln's Birthday (Revision 1, blank verse) - by Brownlie - 06-18-2013, 04:29 AM

RE: Lincoln's Birthday (Revision 1, blank verse) - by svanhoeven - 06-18-2013, 05:04 AM

RE: Lincoln's Birthday (Revision 1, blank verse) - by billy - 06-18-2013, 12:41 PM

RE: Lincoln's Birthday (Revision 1, blank verse) - by milo - 06-18-2013, 12:54 PM

RE: Lincoln's Birthday (Revision 1, blank verse) - by svanhoeven - 06-18-2013, 01:23 PM

RE: Lincoln's Birthday (Revision 2, blank verse/billy meter fix) - by billy - 06-18-2013, 04:03 PM

RE: Lincoln's Birthday (Revision 2, blank verse/billy meter fix) - by milo - 06-18-2013, 04:37 PM

RE: Lincoln's Birthday (Revision 2, blank verse/billy meter fix) - by svanhoeven - 06-18-2013, 10:14 PM

RE: Lincoln's Birthday (Revision 2, blank verse/billy meter fix) - by milo - 06-19-2013, 06:32 AM

RE: Lincoln's Birthday (Revision 2, blank verse/billy meter fix) - by svanhoeven - 06-19-2013, 06:49 AM

RE: Lincoln's Birthday (Revision 3) - by billy - 06-19-2013, 08:11 AM

RE: Lincoln's Birthday (Revision 3) - by milo - 06-19-2013, 08:37 AM

RE: Lincoln's Birthday (Revision 3) - by svanhoeven - 06-19-2013, 10:26 AM

RE: Lincoln's Birthday (Revision 3) - by milo - 06-19-2013, 06:27 PM

RE: Lincoln's Birthday (Revision 3) - by billy - 06-19-2013, 09:08 AM

RE: Lincoln's Birthday (Revision 3) - by wystan1000 - 06-19-2013, 06:07 PM

RE: Lincoln's Birthday (Revision 3) - by R.C. KITCHENS - 06-20-2013, 06:01 PM

RE: Lincoln's Birthday (Revision 3) - by svanhoeven - 06-20-2013, 08:52 PM

RE: Lincoln's Birthday (Revision 3) - by billy - 06-21-2013, 07:42 AM

RE: Lincoln's Birthday (Revision 4) - by svanhoeven - 09-22-2013, 01:56 PM

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