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(07-20-2013, 03:20 AM)carrielsunday Wrote:  Something about a hurting heart,
an angry heart, a sad soul
always brings the words
to the surface
flowing onto the page
with such ease and fluidity that
when things brighten up again,

I am
dry.
Good story on writer's block, I would suggest changing the title to something along the lines of "obstacle" instead of block, because that can give it away. Of course this is your poem and you can title it however you want, but that is just my two cents. Thanks for the good read Thumbsup
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block. - by carrielsunday - 07-20-2013, 03:20 AM
RE: block. - by Snags - 07-20-2013, 04:27 AM
RE: block. - by Heartafire - 07-20-2013, 04:53 AM
RE: block. - by cidermaid - 07-20-2013, 05:57 AM
RE: block. - by Malu - 09-22-2013, 03:19 AM



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