Thoughts of You

[tigrflye]

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All I have to do is imagine your face. (Just imagining your face)

That you would be the one for which I would long. ( I don't like long rhyming with known.)

Screaming out this isn’t fair. ( I scream, "This isn't fair!")

Now in whom am I to confide. (Now in whom can I confide?)

Two no three times it skips, ( I like this line)

Feeling as if it is peace that I have found. (Embracing the peace that I have found. Cherishing the peace that I have found. )

who am I to make suggestions about your poem? I don't know. But they are just suggestions.