09-20-2013, 03:30 AM
The second line of the second stanza, I think you mean too instead of "to" other than that, I really liked the depth you went at about a captain smoking, tells a good story with a modern take home message, nice work!
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A captain reformed.
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A captain reformed. - by Savanna - 09-14-2013, 09:28 AM
RE: A captain reformed. - by Malu - 09-20-2013, 03:30 AM
RE: A captain reformed. - by Erthona - 09-20-2013, 12:05 PM
RE: A captain reformed. - by Jim Steele - 09-23-2013, 03:45 AM
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