Tidal Wave

[tectak]

Thanks for the advice! This poem actually started with the thoughts "Brilliant minds are seen as obscure" and "Lights are snuffed out
before they burn bright" in reference to the complex yet under minded skills of some autistic people. I decided to break off and do another poem regarding that but kept those original lines, got lazy, and went with the cliche rebellious idea.

It is a puzzle to me that response to crit by reasoned explanation more often than not gives more credibility to the poet than the poem itself. Well done you...just don't be lazy next time That response has Iimited repeatability.
Best,
tectak