09-13-2013, 02:21 AM
It expresses something deep and unspeakable, but it does it in a very useless way. The same old righteous indignation that is truly righteous and hopelessly ineffectual. There is a tidal wave coming, but it hasn't come yet, and we don't know what it will be like....This poem has been made in the exact same way with the exact same words hundreds of times. It will keep on being made until, and when and if, the tidal wave comes; but this poem, the way it's expressed, the whole execution from start to finish, will be incidental.
Whatever deep thoughts and feelings led to this poem, you should find some way of speaking them. So far, everything feels secondhand and shallow.
Whatever deep thoughts and feelings led to this poem, you should find some way of speaking them. So far, everything feels secondhand and shallow.