09-13-2013, 01:58 AM
First off, love the username, this sounds like it could be a power metal song or something. Very interesting idea tying gods of different beliefs together, but perhaps a bit more on the machines forsaking us and how that works into this apocalyptic wrath of gods scenario. And as jdguyb stated, the random rhyming is quite odd for me as a reader as I keep looking for more rhymes throughout your poem.
I'd love to see more of the types of poems!
I'd love to see more of the types of poems!