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09-11-2013, 07:02 PM

(09-11-2013, 12:26 PM)ellajam Wrote: "sole footprint" is fun, and sharp, but no thanks. I think the reason I'm sticking with "same" is because my heart broke that the house looked the same while I knew it was changed forever without Alice. I accept that it's not coming across, but I can't think of an edit that expresses it better. Yet. Thanks so much for all your input.

That's a good reason to leave it as is!

My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris

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Two For Alice (Edit #4 with punctuation) - by ellajam - 09-10-2013, 07:22 AM

RE: Two For Alice - by cidermaid - 09-10-2013, 04:47 PM

RE: Two For Alice - by billy - 09-10-2013, 05:40 PM

RE: Two For Alice - by ellajam - 09-10-2013, 08:06 PM

RE: Two For Alice - by ChristopherSea - 09-10-2013, 08:51 PM

RE: Two For Alice - by ellajam - 09-10-2013, 10:13 PM

RE: Two For Alice - by ChristopherSea - 09-10-2013, 10:31 PM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #1) - by spookyfoot - 09-11-2013, 08:38 AM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #1) - by ellajam - 09-11-2013, 09:59 AM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #2) - by ChristopherSea - 09-11-2013, 12:07 PM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #2) - by ellajam - 09-11-2013, 12:26 PM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #2) - by ChristopherSea - 09-11-2013, 07:02 PM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #2) - by billy - 09-11-2013, 12:41 PM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #2) - by ellajam - 09-11-2013, 12:53 PM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #2) - by billy - 09-11-2013, 01:12 PM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #2) - by ellajam - 09-11-2013, 09:17 PM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #2) - by rowens - 09-12-2013, 12:16 AM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #2) - by Todd - 09-12-2013, 01:48 AM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #2) - by ellajam - 09-12-2013, 02:40 AM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #3) - by ellajam - 09-15-2013, 02:16 AM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #3) - by cidermaid - 09-15-2013, 02:36 AM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #3) - by ellajam - 09-15-2013, 02:45 AM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #4) - by ellajam - 10-16-2013, 11:59 PM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #4) - by tectak - 10-17-2013, 12:49 AM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #4) - by ellajam - 10-17-2013, 01:16 AM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #4) - by tectak - 10-17-2013, 04:18 PM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #4) - by ellajam - 10-17-2013, 11:36 PM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #4) - by tectak - 10-18-2013, 12:05 AM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #4) - by ellajam - 10-25-2013, 07:50 PM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #4) - by Todd - 10-25-2013, 08:52 PM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #4) - by ellajam - 10-25-2013, 09:00 PM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #4) - by tectak - 10-26-2013, 04:43 AM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #4) - by ellajam - 10-26-2013, 05:12 AM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #4 with punctuation) - by tectak - 10-26-2013, 05:44 AM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #4 with punctuation) - by ellajam - 10-26-2013, 06:05 AM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #4 with punctuation) - by tectak - 10-26-2013, 06:15 AM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #4 with punctuation) - by yourfellowhuman - 12-03-2013, 09:40 AM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #4 with punctuation) - by ellajam - 12-03-2013, 09:52 AM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #4 with punctuation) - by Canaan McGee - 12-04-2013, 11:21 AM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #4 with punctuation) - by ellajam - 12-04-2013, 11:39 AM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #4 with punctuation) - by Todd - 12-04-2013, 11:42 AM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #4 with punctuation) - by milo - 12-04-2013, 11:45 AM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #4 with punctuation) - by ellajam - 12-04-2013, 11:54 AM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #4 with punctuation) - by milo - 12-04-2013, 12:44 PM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #4 with punctuation) - by ellajam - 12-04-2013, 12:58 PM

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