09-11-2013, 12:26 PM
"sole footprint" is fun, and sharp, but no thanks. I think the reason I'm sticking with "same" is because my heart broke that the house looked the same while I knew it was changed forever without Alice. I accept that it's not coming across, but I can't think of an edit that expresses it better. Yet. Thanks so much for all your input.
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