09-11-2013, 12:57 AM
Ruble between my eyes
strolling through deaths
gaze I realize.
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The continuity between "strolling.... realize" is a little off to me. But then again, I am a novice, I might be wrong. As someone already mentioned, some very basic punctuation errors that might be a typo.
strolling through deaths
gaze I realize.
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The continuity between "strolling.... realize" is a little off to me. But then again, I am a novice, I might be wrong. As someone already mentioned, some very basic punctuation errors that might be a typo.