|
Hale
|
|
09-09-2013, 11:44 AM
Your manner and style is trite. The way you write. At least in this poem. That's my critique of it. It doesn't offer enough to have much said about it. So basically, what I'm saying is to try harder. If I didn't keep responding to you, this post would most likely sink into Novice obscurity after a day or two.
|
|
« Next Oldest | Next Newest »
|
| Messages In This Thread |
|
RE: Hale - by rowens - 09-09-2013, 09:45 AM
RE: Hale - by rowens - 09-09-2013, 10:42 AM
RE: Hale - by rowens - 09-09-2013, 11:26 AM
RE: Hale - by rowens - 09-09-2013, 11:44 AM
RE: Hale - by BigRed - 09-16-2013, 05:05 AM
|
