09-09-2013, 11:26 AM
You can build your own poem.
Other people might see something more than I do in what you have here. But I see nothing but trite utterances after the first stanza. The first stanza is sort of trite too, but at least it sounds pretty.
Other people might see something more than I do in what you have here. But I see nothing but trite utterances after the first stanza. The first stanza is sort of trite too, but at least it sounds pretty.