Right and Wrong
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Language issues aside, good for you. This is far more lucid than I would be in your place.

I think that right and wrong can be both at once, as you imply, but as mentioned, currently it does not make this plain.

Instead of a coin, Perhaps a more apt metaphor might be a circle, with two sides, inside and outside.

We do tend to rely on "facts" so we do not have to think about things like random death, and monsters under the bed. You got that part right.

Lastly, I might suggest that the essence of life IS uncertainty, this is one big way we are unique, and can avoid uniformity.

Bravo for you, keep on writing, questioning and editing. Wink

"In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite." - Paul Dirac (1902 - 1984)
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Right and Wrong - by blueforest10 - 09-08-2013, 07:54 PM
RE: Right and Wrong - by rowens - 09-09-2013, 02:20 AM
RE: Right and Wrong - by tectak - 09-09-2013, 07:06 AM
RE: Right and Wrong - by Reilley - 09-09-2013, 09:31 AM
RE: Right and Wrong - by blueforest10 - 09-10-2013, 05:04 PM
RE: Right and Wrong - by tectak - 09-10-2013, 05:35 PM



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