The Apple

[Malu]

Interesting piece. I rather enjoyed it. Free form, very nice. No need to constrict yourself. Although I might not have understood the message (truly a novice critic lol) I did enjoy what you may have been trying to convey in this piece.

I'm in the same boat haha, I am without a doubt a novice critic as well. But thank you for you feedback!

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What comes to mind when you hear the word Apple?

New York?
A red fruit?
Kissing up to the teacher?
A tree?
Keeping the doctor away?
Adam's throat?

When I hear the word Apple
I first see the fruit
A nice, shiny, succulent Apple
It lures me in with its grace
I take my first bite

And then I remember
I really don't care for Apples
Yet, I take another bite
And another
I finish the Apple

iphone, ipad, ipod, mac

I'm like that with pizza, always think I will like it cos it looks good, but then, after two or four bites...

I completely forgot about apple products haha, nice contribution!