Salivating
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(07-29-2013, 10:31 PM)newsclippings Wrote:  Dizzy, I'm chasing the furry snake from my butt
when I smell raw meat slapping hot oil.
Master does not give,
certainly does not understand meaning behind
"best friend."

I would give up all my toys
for juicy meats,
like the ones he eats.
I could watch a dog chasing its tail all day, there is something simplistic and comedic in that activity that makes me smile, of course it only gets better with that half growl of excited frustration. Great poem and POV. Best TOMH

If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out
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Salivating - by newsclippings - 07-29-2013, 10:31 PM
RE: Salivating - by rowens - 07-30-2013, 12:39 AM
RE: Salivating - by cidermaid - 07-30-2013, 02:00 AM
RE: Salivating - by newsclippings - 07-30-2013, 03:05 AM
RE: Salivating - by ChristopherSea - 08-08-2013, 08:14 PM
RE: Salivating - by ScurryFunger - 08-10-2013, 12:11 AM
RE: Salivating - by newsclippings - 08-22-2013, 03:46 PM
RE: Salivating - by Bunx - 08-23-2013, 06:46 AM
RE: Salivating - by newsclippings - 08-23-2013, 12:26 PM
RE: Salivating - by Bunx - 08-24-2013, 03:28 AM
RE: Salivating - by FayandFire - 08-27-2013, 10:55 AM
RE: Salivating - by Keith - 09-09-2013, 06:59 AM



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