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Twisted into Regret
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09-08-2013, 12:43 AM
(09-07-2013, 02:05 PM)milo Wrote:(09-06-2013, 01:17 PM)Expendable Youth. Wrote: Still tinkering around with what I think could work, I let the topic co e to me this time. I'd appreciate some critiquehow about you start giving feedback to others and you will learn why this does not work and certainly doesn't belong in the serious critique section. I have given critique, first thing I did when I signed up here was critique a poem. |
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Twisted into Regret - by Expendable Youth. - 09-06-2013, 01:17 PM
RE: Twisted into Regret - by tectak - 09-06-2013, 03:53 PM
RE: Twisted into Regret - by Expendable Youth. - 09-07-2013, 12:15 AM
RE: Twisted into Regret - by Erthona - 09-07-2013, 02:06 AM
RE: Twisted into Regret - by milo - 09-07-2013, 02:05 PM
RE: Twisted into Regret - by Expendable Youth. - 09-08-2013, 12:43 AM
RE: Twisted into Regret - by milo - 09-08-2013, 01:11 AM
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