The Apple
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I don't know if I would really consider this a poem. Watch what happens when we remove the line breaks Thumbsup
(09-07-2013, 11:51 PM)Malu Wrote:  What comes to mind when you hear the word Apple?
New York? A red fruit? Kissing up to the teacher? A tree? Keeping the doctor away? Adam's throat? When I hear the word Apple I first see the fruit A nice, shiny, succulent Apple It lures me in with its grace I take my first biteAnd then I remember I really don't care for Apples Yet, I take another bite And anotherI finish the Apple
Yep, it is just poorly written prose. Poetry is not poorly written prose with line breaks.
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The Apple - by Malu - 09-07-2013, 11:51 PM
RE: The Apple - by milo - 09-08-2013, 12:41 AM
RE: The Apple - by Malu - 09-08-2013, 01:27 AM
RE: The Apple - by btrudo - 09-08-2013, 01:07 AM
RE: The Apple - by secretkeeper - 09-09-2013, 04:00 AM
RE: The Apple - by Malu - 09-09-2013, 07:24 AM
RE: The Apple - by Elsie Fillmore - 09-09-2013, 07:11 AM
RE: The Apple - by ScurryFunger - 09-09-2013, 07:16 AM



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