09-08-2013, 12:41 AM
I don't know if I would really consider this a poem. Watch what happens when we remove the line breaks 

(09-07-2013, 11:51 PM)Malu Wrote: What comes to mind when you hear the word Apple?Yep, it is just poorly written prose. Poetry is not poorly written prose with line breaks.
New York? A red fruit? Kissing up to the teacher? A tree? Keeping the doctor away? Adam's throat? When I hear the word Apple I first see the fruit A nice, shiny, succulent Apple It lures me in with its grace I take my first biteAnd then I remember I really don't care for Apples Yet, I take another bite And anotherI finish the Apple