My Scythe Edit One!

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My Scythe Edit One!

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09-07-2013, 06:11 AM

(09-06-2013, 11:58 AM)Malu Wrote: I'm really compelled by the meaning and the allusions being used to portray a very surreal image in my mind.

This is not considered adequate feedback on the actual poem. Please cite specific examples of what you though worked or didn't work.

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My Scythe Edit One! - by jdguyb - 09-01-2013, 12:10 AM

RE: My Scythe - by cidermaid - 09-01-2013, 01:06 AM

RE: My Scythe - by whatispoetry? - 09-02-2013, 11:35 AM

RE: My Scythe Edit One! - by Malu - 09-06-2013, 11:58 AM

RE: My Scythe Edit One! - by milo - 09-07-2013, 06:11 AM

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