09-06-2013, 02:08 PM
(09-05-2013, 11:02 PM)Reilley Wrote: On the plus side, I can certainly feel the emotional pain you are trying to convey, but sympathy is lessened by use of the vulgarity. I think you can get the severity of the point across without that.I agree completely. The pain is real here, and the expletive does remove the reader from sympathetic feeling. Although I don't believe that was the intention, merely a symptom of the real pain trying its hardest to get out and be heard.