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Latency (edit 1)
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09-06-2013, 08:33 AM
(09-05-2013, 07:18 AM)in-need-of-an-empire Wrote: i found the alliteration charming. i always do like alliteration personally. i also enjoyed the vague imagery and how it seems very open to interpretation. all in all i feel that this is quite good. thumbs up from me Bill.I did title this "Latency", so if you want to offer an interpretation, please do. thanks, Bill |
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Latency (edit 1) - by btrudo - 09-02-2013, 02:31 AM
RE: Latency - by whatispoetry? - 09-02-2013, 12:17 PM
RE: Latency (edit 1) - by btrudo - 09-03-2013, 02:35 AM
RE: Latency - by expiring_touch - 09-02-2013, 01:46 PM
RE: Latency - by allykat727 - 09-03-2013, 12:21 AM
RE: Latency (edit 1) - by in-need-of-an-empire - 09-05-2013, 07:18 AM
RE: Latency (edit 1) - by btrudo - 09-06-2013, 08:33 AM
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