Invisible to beauty
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(09-03-2013, 08:56 AM)rowens Wrote:  It only makes a little sense. You should read it over a few times and see what you mean in each line.
I just saw her today, and i started writing on a piece of paper i had the feelings that i felt.

i have no poetry experience

so any help would be appreciated
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Invisible to beauty - by ruagun - 09-03-2013, 08:49 AM
RE: Invisible to beauty - by rowens - 09-03-2013, 08:56 AM
RE: Invisible to beauty - by ruagun - 09-03-2013, 09:37 AM
RE: Invisible to beauty - by rowens - 09-03-2013, 09:48 AM
RE: Invisible to beauty - by ruagun - 09-03-2013, 09:51 AM
RE: Invisible to beauty - by makeshift - 09-03-2013, 01:00 PM
RE: Invisible to beauty - by ruagun - 09-03-2013, 10:24 PM
RE: Invisible to beauty - by rowens - 09-04-2013, 12:15 AM
RE: Invisible to beauty - by Erthona - 09-04-2013, 12:22 AM
RE: Invisible to beauty - by OliverPorano - 09-04-2013, 04:55 AM
RE: Invisible to beauty - by betalife - 09-04-2013, 05:48 AM
RE: Invisible to beauty - by ruagun - 09-04-2013, 06:38 AM



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