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08-31-2013, 11:38 PM
(08-31-2013, 06:06 PM)casper-zakelijk Wrote: I'll change the spelling errors (I'm not a native..), although I do think I'll keep the arcaic "lighted" instead of "lit", if it's not too wrong. It sounds a whole lot better here, I think. As for the mod's remark, I'm sorry and I'll leave feedback on other poems right now.Good egg. Best, tectak |
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Sorrow - by casper-zakelijk - 08-31-2013, 10:01 AM
RE: Sorrow - by Obloquy - 08-31-2013, 02:12 PM
RE: Sorrow - by tectak - 08-31-2013, 04:46 PM
RE: Sorrow - by cidermaid - 08-31-2013, 04:28 PM
RE: Sorrow - by casper-zakelijk - 08-31-2013, 06:06 PM
RE: Sorrow - by tectak - 08-31-2013, 11:38 PM
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