Perspective

[makeshift]

As others have said powerful poem. The last section really came as a surprise to me. The straightforward and almost bleak language serve as a great vehicle for delivering your message. I agree with others that the rhythm could use some work though there certainly is something worthwhile to the current stilted nature of it. The only line I didn't care for was "his shadowy nightmare." as it felt a bit cliche. Thnx for sharing. (: