08-19-2013, 06:11 AM
Thank you for your critique and kind words. I agree with your comments on preposition breaks:
The next day jeers from the lads
When I cried rape: 'Did you enjoy it?'
Assuming I must have led that man
With my womanly touch.
This already seems better. I suspect a rewording may be best, I'll need to consider it.
Thank you again.
The next day jeers from the lads
When I cried rape: 'Did you enjoy it?'
Assuming I must have led that man
With my womanly touch.
This already seems better. I suspect a rewording may be best, I'll need to consider it.
Thank you again.