Spineless

[ChristopherSea]

I certainly hope that you were never assaulted. Yes, all predatory humans are spineless. I don’t accept or condone rape, violence or abuse of any kind. Your message is certainly loud, but not quite clear in this Spoken Word (Perhaps Shouted Word) poem. This is a bit all over the place, in my opinion. Who is spineless? That rib thing ended with Eve, even if you are a fundamentalist. There seems to be a narrator, something like news flashes and the ‘ranting’ feminist (no offence here) and perhaps some internal dialog. I find them hard to identify or connect. I would probably use italics for one and bold for another, if a third, then parenthesis. I will have to swing by for another read to comment further other than to say this is emotive.