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Falling
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08-11-2013, 05:24 AM
I am not one to critique sonnets very well, but I’ll try. L3 needs one more beat, L7 one less. I won’t check your iambs, as there are plenty here that will. I saw a little fairy herein, but some descriptors might fit a hummingbird if you put wings on it. I have a garden statuette that would fit in here quite nicely. The title may suggest something else. The last two couplets are my favorite./Chris
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris
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RE: Falling - by ChristopherSea - 08-11-2013, 05:24 AM
RE: Falling - by Keith - 08-11-2013, 06:48 PM
RE: Falling - by billy - 08-11-2013, 08:51 AM
RE: Falling - by tectak - 08-12-2013, 10:57 PM
RE: Falling - by Keith - 08-13-2013, 07:38 AM
RE: Falling - by ray - 08-13-2013, 12:39 AM
RE: Falling - by tectak - 08-14-2013, 01:50 AM
RE: Falling - by Keith - 08-16-2013, 08:33 AM
RE: Falling - by trueenigma - 08-19-2013, 08:13 AM
RE: Falling - by milo - 08-19-2013, 08:59 AM
RE: Falling - by Keith - 08-19-2013, 09:15 AM
RE: Falling - by trueenigma - 08-19-2013, 09:38 AM
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