08-09-2013, 02:58 AM
Hi.
Punctuation-wise (and hence syntax), something weird happened there. There were supposed to semi-colons where there weren't any when I posted this. I don't know what the deal with that was. I've changed where I had put semi-colons.
Meter-wise: there's not supposed to be one.
Meaning/clarity: the octet is about my cat. I thought "saliva-slicked" would act as an indicator of that, but I guess I could have made that clearer.
Punctuation-wise (and hence syntax), something weird happened there. There were supposed to semi-colons where there weren't any when I posted this. I don't know what the deal with that was. I've changed where I had put semi-colons.
Meter-wise: there's not supposed to be one.
Meaning/clarity: the octet is about my cat. I thought "saliva-slicked" would act as an indicator of that, but I guess I could have made that clearer.