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Scent of Plumeria
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03-12-2010, 03:44 PM
(03-12-2010, 03:29 PM)addy Wrote: One technique my sister taught me is to read your poem out loud. If you start feeling out of breath, then you definitely need to break your phrases up some moreI broke the uber long sentence and applied the technique and it turned out well after reading.  I hope the effects have improved.
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Scent of Plumeria - by jdelacroix - 03-10-2010, 08:36 AM
RE: When I was nine - by addy - 03-10-2010, 11:58 AM
RE: When I was nine - by billy - 03-10-2010, 12:05 PM
RE: Scent of Plumeria - by jdelacroix - 03-12-2010, 09:48 AM
RE: Scent of Plumeria - by billy - 03-12-2010, 11:07 AM
RE: Scent of Plumeria - by addy - 03-12-2010, 03:29 PM
RE: Scent of Plumeria - by jdelacroix - 03-12-2010, 03:44 PM
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