Depression

[Zabrina]

You shouldn't feel the need to make everything rhyme. No less, the end of every line. This whole thing is kitsch. Your other poem was much better.

I understand what you're saying and I haven't really made any poem that hasn't rhymed before. I guess I enjoy trying to make things fit in a more obvious way. I would like to try a different way of writing another time. Thanks for the input though. However, how did this one lack compared to the other poem I posted? Just for a better understanding why this one is worse than the other, or not enjoyable in general. Thank you