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Scent of Plumeria
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03-12-2010, 03:29 PM
One technique my sister taught me is to read your poem out loud. If you start feeling out of breath, then you definitely need to break your phrases up some more
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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Scent of Plumeria - by jdelacroix - 03-10-2010, 08:36 AM
RE: When I was nine - by addy - 03-10-2010, 11:58 AM
RE: When I was nine - by billy - 03-10-2010, 12:05 PM
RE: Scent of Plumeria - by jdelacroix - 03-12-2010, 09:48 AM
RE: Scent of Plumeria - by billy - 03-12-2010, 11:07 AM
RE: Scent of Plumeria - by addy - 03-12-2010, 03:29 PM
RE: Scent of Plumeria - by jdelacroix - 03-12-2010, 03:44 PM
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