03-12-2010, 03:26 PM
Good revision!
If you're having too much trouble editing a poem, it's also good to let it breathe for a while. We can comment on the critical aspects of it, but in the end it's down to you the poet and what you mean to express. After a short time, you can come back to this poem and appreciate it from a reader's point of view more than a writer's, which is what i think's important.
If you're having too much trouble editing a poem, it's also good to let it breathe for a while. We can comment on the critical aspects of it, but in the end it's down to you the poet and what you mean to express. After a short time, you can come back to this poem and appreciate it from a reader's point of view more than a writer's, which is what i think's important.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?