08-08-2013, 03:25 AM
Hi, yep, I am looking for help I guess, (can you tell I'm gritting my teeth)
nah only kidding, I like to think that I'm not beyond help, you gave me the spacing idea and I like it better now.
perhaps I could work on explaining things in the actual poem. (is lolling allowed, cos It's a habit that I have)
no worries, I'm new around here too, theres so much to learn
I'm def going to start using that preview post button, thats for sure
nah only kidding, I like to think that I'm not beyond help, you gave me the spacing idea and I like it better now.
perhaps I could work on explaining things in the actual poem. (is lolling allowed, cos It's a habit that I have)
(08-08-2013, 03:16 AM)makeshift Wrote:now you made me feel bad!(08-08-2013, 03:03 AM)ScurryFunger Wrote: That was so much more than a mild critique (or it was at least mild)Sorry, trying my hardest to be helpful. I'm new to poetry, witting, reading, and critiquing especially so take my comments with a grain of salt. (:
I was hoping to be broken in gently.
no worries, I'm new around here too, theres so much to learn
I'm def going to start using that preview post button, thats for sure