Untitled poem from a new poet...

Untitled poem from a new poet...

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08-05-2013, 08:37 AM

Thanks for the feedback guys! Rowens, could you be a bit more specific? You said it could use some tightening up, but not really. What exactly do you mean by that? Just a quick example could help me a lot.

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Untitled poem from a new poet... - by alatos - 08-05-2013, 02:23 AM

RE: Untitled poem from a new poet... - by rowens - 08-05-2013, 02:35 AM

RE: Untitled poem from a new poet... - by jdguyb - 08-05-2013, 04:37 AM

RE: Untitled poem from a new poet... - by brandonalsip - 08-05-2013, 07:20 AM

RE: Untitled poem from a new poet... - by alatos - 08-05-2013, 08:37 AM

RE: Untitled poem from a new poet... - by friedmouse420 - 08-05-2013, 08:54 AM

RE: Untitled poem from a new poet... - by billy - 08-05-2013, 05:53 PM

RE: Untitled poem from a new poet... - by alatos - 08-07-2013, 11:08 AM

RE: Untitled poem from a new poet... - by Zabrina - 08-07-2013, 08:45 PM

RE: Untitled poem from a new poet... - by ScurryFunger - 08-07-2013, 10:04 PM

RE: Untitled poem from a new poet... - by alatos - 08-08-2013, 03:07 AM

RE: Untitled poem from a new poet... - by ScurryFunger - 08-08-2013, 03:45 AM

RE: Untitled poem from a new poet... - by rowens - 08-08-2013, 03:54 AM

RE: Untitled poem from a new poet... - by billy - 08-10-2013, 06:09 PM

RE: Untitled poem from a new poet... - by ChristopherSea - 08-12-2013, 09:32 PM

RE: Untitled poem from a new poet... - by alatos - 08-13-2013, 09:04 AM

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