08-03-2013, 01:12 AM
(08-02-2013, 01:25 PM)billy Wrote: this one reminds me of the asian guy who was recently forgotten for 4 days without food or water in the usa.I'm glad to hear you like it and that it gave some different images for you. It was my intention to create a kind of.. what's that called? Ambiguity? In this poem.
it also makes me think of an old male lions on the savannah
i like it, thanks for the read.
Thanks a lot for commenting, billy
