08-02-2013, 12:57 PM
08-02-2013, 01:25 PM
08-03-2013, 01:12 AM
(08-02-2013, 01:25 PM)billy Wrote: [ -> ]this one reminds me of the asian guy who was recently forgotten for 4 days without food or water in the usa.
it also makes me think of an old male lions on the savannah
i like it, thanks for the read.
I'm glad to hear you like it and that it gave some different images for you. It was my intention to create a kind of.. what's that called? Ambiguity? In this poem.
Thanks a lot for commenting, billy
08-05-2013, 11:54 AM
i'm amazed at the quality of your english...it's better than mine and i was born into it 
08-05-2013, 12:37 PM
(08-05-2013, 11:54 AM)billy Wrote: [ -> ]i'm amazed at the quality of your english...it's better than mine and i was born into it
Why thank you so much, billy. I'm actually blushing.
It means a lot to me, cause I really do try my very best at this language.