08-02-2013, 10:15 AM
some good stuff serge but as you know what i think; the vids steal the best of your poetry away is a g string.
my only piece of feedback is;
would
was looking for a cat
like if it was the golden fleece.
read better as;
for the golden fleece.
was like looking for his cat
i'm not sure 'cause i do understand anything but english
anyway, i enjoyed it a lot.
my only piece of feedback is;
would
was looking for a cat
like if it was the golden fleece.
read better as;
for the golden fleece.
was like looking for his cat
i'm not sure 'cause i do understand anything but english
anyway, i enjoyed it a lot.
