The Darkness of Beauty

The Darkness of Beauty

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07-29-2013, 10:47 PM

Thank you for your thoughtful critique, newsclippings Smile

I'll remove "a" before "chicken scratch" in a moment, because I like the effect that creates. The repetition was deliberate, but I take your point about Nicki Minaj. I don't want to be a "nappy headed hoe" Big Grin

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The Darkness of Beauty - by heslopian - 07-29-2013, 02:45 AM

RE: The Darkness of Beauty - by rowens - 07-29-2013, 02:55 AM

RE: The Darkness of Beauty - by milo - 07-29-2013, 03:16 AM

RE: The Darkness of Beauty - by heslopian - 07-29-2013, 03:52 AM

RE: The Darkness of Beauty - by milo - 07-29-2013, 03:58 AM

RE: The Darkness of Beauty - by heslopian - 07-29-2013, 04:42 AM

RE: The Darkness of Beauty - by trueenigma - 07-29-2013, 06:30 AM

RE: The Darkness of Beauty - by R.C. KITCHENS - 07-29-2013, 07:15 AM

RE: The Darkness of Beauty - by heslopian - 07-29-2013, 07:36 AM

RE: The Darkness of Beauty - by newsclippings - 07-29-2013, 10:00 PM

RE: The Darkness of Beauty - by heslopian - 07-29-2013, 10:47 PM

RE: The Darkness of Beauty - by newsclippings - 07-29-2013, 10:57 PM

RE: The Darkness of Beauty - by heslopian - 07-29-2013, 11:11 PM

RE: The Darkness of Beauty - by GrhmJngL - 07-31-2013, 05:46 AM

RE: The Darkness of Beauty - by billy - 07-31-2013, 11:02 AM

RE: The Darkness of Beauty - by heslopian - 07-31-2013, 11:00 PM

RE: The Darkness of Beauty - by rowens - 07-31-2013, 11:17 PM

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