07-29-2013, 02:55 AM
The poem seems pretty fine to me.
If I was making it, I would have added a 'too',
by an artist who soon will die in the open too.
I want to cry, but won't.
Or something like that.
Just to be vulgar and chicken scratchy.
It seems fine with me, the four times I read it.
If I was making it, I would have added a 'too',
by an artist who soon will die in the open too.
I want to cry, but won't.
Or something like that.
Just to be vulgar and chicken scratchy.
It seems fine with me, the four times I read it.