07-29-2013, 12:38 AM
(07-28-2013, 11:27 PM)Wildcard Wrote: Can you think of a way to reinforce that this is an internal memo? A sort of convo with himself about her?Maybe if you changed the title to a question, like "Why Do I Stay with You?". That would make the rest of the poem seem like an answer to the question, justifying "because" and "in spite of" and making it seem like a conversation.
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