The Reasoning

[billy]

the above is the wrong way to take feedback, if you can't use the feedback then don't use it, i hate some of the feedback i get for similar reasons but they took the time to respond and for that i'm extremely grateful. just clench your bum cheeks and let it pass. :J:

i see you did an edit mark.

small but it adds to the poem, specially the last line, lovers do often suffer in silence. the title is is also better.