summer evening

summer evening

billy Offline

Are you alluding to me?

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07-28-2013, 09:58 AM

the storm is perfectly set

is croak needed? or is river frogs and rain enough.
just an option as the last line does work

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summer evening - by Aish - 07-28-2013, 09:47 AM

RE: summer evening - by billy - 07-28-2013, 09:58 AM

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RE: summer evening - by billy - 07-28-2013, 10:09 AM

RE: summer evening - by Aish - 07-28-2013, 10:30 AM

RE: summer evening - by billy - 07-28-2013, 10:34 AM

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